Could you share the article text you want revised? I’ll rewrite it to:
– Vary sentence length and mix active/passive constructions
– Replace sentences that start with “This” with varied openings
– Swap “Besides that” and “Therefore” for more natural transitions (e.g., “Then this,” “What’s interesting, too,” “Well, here it is.”) unless you prefer different phrases
– Avoid repeating the same word at the start of paragraphs
Let me know:
– Keep roughly the same length, or tighten/expand?
– Preserve quotes, citations, and headings?
– Any specific tone (formal, conversational, journalistic)?